Wrote this for a friend...but i guess applicable for all
There are lots of memories in your mind to keep
lots to laugh at & some to weep
Dont ever stop, just move on
Cos there are miles to go before u sleep....
Saturday, September 08, 2007
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4 comments:
Nice flow of thoughts. Beautiful. But the size of the poem is only 4 lines. Why ? If you reduce your poem by another two more lines it will no longer be a poem but it will become "Thirukural" :)
yes..memories are here to stay...but life goes on...nice poem da
Hey. thoughts true to every word...short and sweet !!!
beautiful. nice to see you back if only in such short spurts!!!.
nevertheless do write something lengthier for poor people like me who keep visiting daily.
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