Journey...
We travel on roads leading to the unknown..
we see it all there & yet when we reach there its all gone,
each step takes you little closer, yet each step draws you back,
teaches you on your way that there’s a lot to be learnt & lots that you lack
Sometimes u just pass by experiences, which if left untouched.....just become fleeting thoughts...but if touched & cared for turn into memories that last for ever....here is an attempt to turn such mundane phases in life to something that holds a special meaning....
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4 comments:
By the way..i had to break my head to understand this..wats this unknown thing u see when u take the road to the unknown..guess i am totally unknown to wat u have tried writing..if u are travelling to an unknown place and see it disappear then what did u see there to have disappeared.. wat was that unknown?? i am confused..as much as u are..anyways the poem rhymed well..
Sailu
really good. What I like about it is because it is abstract it is subject to different interpretations
ok .. since u asked me to comment .. i mean re comment..here it is.. i broke my head over this.. and understood it after talking to u..
this is wat happens when u start expecting and then u take some road and then reach there to find it either with more than expected or lesser than expected instances..
all tht is left to do then is take the next step forward..life anyways comes a full circle..until we all reach the grave..and that destination is anyways decided..enjoy this rollercoaster till u meet the end..
Sailu..
imagine a day when you say to yourself that you have reached your goal in life and have learnt all that there is to learn. imagine
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