I let you walk ahead, not to lead me,
I let u go cos your shadow is what I wanted to be.
I let you fall not to see u bleed,
I just wanted you to know, I will be there whenever you need.
I did see the pain in your eyes & the tears it hid.
I just waited for the right time & the right moment,
But long before I realized the truth, that time had come & long left.
I accept I did that, didn’t u do the same?
Years have passed & we have moved on
But look where It has got us, isn’t it a shame?
Friends or acquaintance whatever we may now be.
Nothing about the past can I change or now write about,
Things could have been little better is all that I can now agree.
I dont know what was I thinking when i wrote this..just a flood of thoughts i happened to pen down.
8 comments:
Well time does bring those feelings of guilt upon everyone, it wrings us by our hearts into feelings we long wish had never happened, wished we had never experienced.
But time also brings with it a balm that we can use to try and forget those wounds, and try not to pry them apart ourselves, of course not everyone can resist the urge to pry apart a healing wound and see how it looks inside.
Do keep them coming, seems more like you are writing my autobiography without even knowing me, really fun the paradox.
very nice.
and also forgot to mention...very colorful...:)
Well expressed feelings!!
The poem is good. But surely you must have been thinking of something or someone specific when you wrote it. How can it be just random?
very nice kanna.... keep it up...
It was jus too pensive. having said that .. the thought trail fabric was well knit.
I am sure you had some one (may be a loved one, not anymore though) in mind when you penned this down.
This is nice
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